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Day 56 - We don't eat the patients

Posted by Alyssa Drake on 5 October, 2021 at 14:55

While I told myself I wouldn't limit my words on this introductory chapter, I also didn't want to spend the week working on it, when I know I still have to write Reflected for this collection.


So, instead of expanding on Myra's interactions with Jenny and Crina, I cut them short to allow both ladies to share their tales without influence from me.


By doing this, I used roughly a half-chapter to dismiss one character and bring in the next. Since, I've already decided how I want the next interaction to occur, ending this small section with the line "We don't eat the patients" was a great way to introduce Crina, who happens to be a vampire.


Tomorrow, I have to decide if I'm flipping the two 1st person POV stories or if I'm leaving them as is.

Categories: Writing after dark

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